I thought this was pretty good. Especially for a rough draft. The only thing I would suggest doing differently is perhaps working on making the transitions a little smoother and using more varied pictures during the dialog. Great job! ~Jessica
Here is my suggestion good sir! When the dialog is playing and you have the pictures of mckinney and henderson maybe show pictures of the late matthew shepard as well. and colby said he wanted more garth brooks songs. I say more cow bell but ITS AMAZING!!! I can smell an oscar!
I thought this was pretty good. Especially for a rough draft. The only thing I would suggest doing differently is perhaps working on making the transitions a little smoother and using more varied pictures during the dialog.
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~Jessica
Here is my suggestion good sir! When the dialog is playing and you have the pictures of mckinney and henderson maybe show pictures of the late matthew shepard as well. and colby said he wanted more garth brooks songs. I say more cow bell but ITS AMAZING!!! I can smell an oscar!
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